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Dinosaur Invasion by JZLobo

:iconfarlydatau:
amm...
u asked for critique for this deviation, so i try my best for comment on this.. in coloring the objects such as the couple and the dinosaur its perfect! ( lot of better than me :D ), might be for the sky and the smoke, i think theres a less for dimension there, for me maybe i'll add some soft cloud for the sky, or maybe another shadows on the smoke :)
and u need to know that,i write this, not because i better than u. i write this for got some feedback for my work :D, if its not bother of course :)
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JZLobo Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I am tweaking the sky a bit. I'll see what I can do about the smoke.

I wouldn't feel comfortable critiquing your work because you already have more skill than I. I can't really draw. Sorry.
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farlydatau Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
:) its ok my friend, u better than me in coloring people
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JZLobo Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I see. Well, I'm still barely figuring out how to do that myself. I don't feel comfortable giving advice just yet.
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